Bk1: Ch11: Pg21
Grand Junction, CO
1 Day Until Extraction
1b. Aray checking watch
2a.
Arayanna: Hey there. Time to get up. It's your shift.
2b.
Maeye: Who's stupid idea was it for me to get last watch?
Arayanna: Uh...yours.
Maeye: Well, you're my girlfriend - aren't you supposed to stop me from making stupid choices?
Arayanna: That, my love, would be a full time occupation.
Charlotte: Shoosh! Some people are trying to sleep.
3a.
Maeye: Anything to report?
Arayanna: More fighting on the ridge across the valley. Nothing new.
Maeye: Ok. See you in 3 hours.
Arayanna: Be careful, love.
3b.
Maeye: Careful is my middle name.
4a.
4b.
Arakakakakaaaa!
Maeye: What the hell was that?
5a.
Arakakakakaaaa!
5b.
Maeye: Oh holy shit.
6a.
Maeye: You look like a peach.
Maeye: A shot to hell peach.
6b.
Maeye: Sorry, little Peach. I have to...
Maeye: I have to...
7a.
7b.
Maeye: Oh bloody hell.
8a.
Maeye: I have to save you.
Was wondering what was happening in the first panel (thought maybe Aray was zapping bugs or something 😛 ) until read her report
Yea – I struggled with getting that idea to show through visually. I think I should have made the first panel full size and then the last panel a split instead of the other way around. Could have got more detail in there that way I think.
It works as it is: properly conveys the distance, if it was as big as the last panel it would seem closer than it is
Honestly, wouldn’t expect anything less from Maeye
😀
The girls have the best remedy for Charlie’s night terrors 😉
Agreed. 😀
Huh. Not sure if this is a good idea … but life saving often ends in making new allies.
Wait, is Maeye being mind-controlled?! That can’t be good.
No, that’s just the type of person Maeye is (remember how she saved Aray when they first met?)
Yea – it’s just Maeye. Given the choice, she will almost always pick love and compassion over violence. Almost always…
Kinda can see the upcoming ‘talk’ with Aray, about how dangerous and stupid it was, only for Maeye to remind her that was what she did when they first met
Those wings on the lady demon look amazing!
Thank you!
Forgot to mention: hope Maeye is careful and watches her back, she may not have been the only one to hear the cries…
“Hello hoo-man, my name is …Bait”
Nah, any other hyu-mon who heard her wouldn’t have gotten close, they would have emptied a full clip (magazine?) into her from a distance, and then used a second one to make sure
Well, another hardware failure. This one not as bad – power supply died. Unfortunately it died in the middle of this snow storm. Dug out this morning and found a shop open so I have a new badass power supply chugging along in my old ass system.
Next page is well under way. Hoping to have it out by mid-week. I really want to get 2 pages out this month. 🙂
Do you have panels done? If so, then you could post the first panels you have, and update with panels in order as you finish them. Depends on your process, though :J
Hi Feori.
Thanks for your work !
‘Careful is my middle name’
Nooo, it is ‘naive’ or ‘caring’
Well, Maeye just being herself
Who knows. It always seems that kindness solves a lot of problems that aggression would not.