That is one cool-looking sloama; the horns look a bit out-of-place, but they don’t actually seem wrong, just… fey or unearthly or something :J
Two very-different flavors of action panels, both tasty. You’re getting better at this, Feori :J
Hm. I think we’re seeing “hot magic system on magic system action”, i.e. Maeye is about to bust out a composite of the two magics. I look forward to it :3
I’m not sure how, but Aray manages to look distinctly badass while being flung against a stone wall O_o
Really cool action sequence! Fight is going better than expected, if we can keep Aray from getting eaten (in the bad way :P). Surprised you missed the obvious (to me, anyway) gag of having Fiet ride up out of the “water” hanging off Maeye’s necklace. 😀
Ah yes. The typos. No matter how hard I try I cannot seem to avoid them. But, at least it’s been a few pages since my last one. Thanks for the heads up!
Maybe you’re trying too hard to avoid them. The best way to avoid them is reread (once or twice) the text after the picture is done. So you can spot typos before they begin surfing the web. Learned it the hard way.
umm… they have a bond…
Yes they do!
Wow 😀
That is one cool-looking sloama; the horns look a bit out-of-place, but they don’t actually seem wrong, just… fey or unearthly or something :J
Two very-different flavors of action panels, both tasty. You’re getting better at this, Feori :J
Hm. I think we’re seeing “hot magic system on magic system action”, i.e. Maeye is about to bust out a composite of the two magics. I look forward to it :3
I’m not sure how, but Aray manages to look distinctly badass while being flung against a stone wall O_o
Thank you very much for the compliments!
I have a page in mind for hot magic on magic action, actually. That will come up later in this chapter.
Aray would look badass gardening. 🙂
Really cool action sequence! Fight is going better than expected, if we can keep Aray from getting eaten (in the bad way :P). Surprised you missed the obvious (to me, anyway) gag of having Fiet ride up out of the “water” hanging off Maeye’s necklace. 😀
Would have been like Spongebob on Hasslehoff!
terrific page man!
Thank you very much!
Every time I look at this page I say to myself, “at the sound of the slam, the time will be kick ass o’clock!” 😀
LOL!
Danel? Have we met this ‘Danel’ before? And please, let it be a She-Beast
Yes, we have met her. She was one of Sha’ag’s “victims” from Bayontohr. Chapter 4 page 10.
Oh, there she is (still not on the Character list 😛 )
I think you have a typo in the incentive.
Bekha’s mom says “No short cuts, you here me ?”, “you here me” needs to be “you hear me”. Unless it’s a dialect of some sort.
It still is a beautiful drawing of a girl getting ready to go out having (a lot of) fun !
Ah yes. The typos. No matter how hard I try I cannot seem to avoid them. But, at least it’s been a few pages since my last one. Thanks for the heads up!
Maybe you’re trying too hard to avoid them. The best way to avoid them is reread (once or twice) the text after the picture is done. So you can spot typos before they begin surfing the web. Learned it the hard way.
Reading it backwards usually works.
Hadn’t even noticed, was too focused on Bekha’s lacy derriere
Heya folks. The next page will be done tomorrow. Sorry for the delay! Gotta go see a man about a boat. 🙂