Bk1: Ch11: Pg23
Arayanna: Hey there! How was your patrol?
Maeye: Uh. Uneventfulish?
Arayanna: Great. You ready to go?
1b.
Maeye: Sure.
Maeye: Don't suppose we have time for a quickie before we go...
Arayanna: I wish, love. But we're on a tight timeline.
Maeye: Of course. You're right.
2a.
Maeye: Ya know...Charlie could drive and we could fool around in the back.
Arayanna: Maeye!
Maeye: Alright...alright.
2b.
Maeye: Anyone mind if I just pull one off real quick?
Arayanna and Charlotte: Maeye!
3a.
Arayanna: Alight. We've got 2 hours to get into position.
Maeye: That is my sniper point to the north.
Arayanna: I will be working my way to the ruins on foot.
Charlotte: And I will be eyes in the skies.
3b.
Arayanna: COM check.
Maeye: Ground Control to Major Tom.
Charlotte: Check 2. Check 2.
3c.
Maeye: You be careful.
Arayanna: I will. I promise.
4a.
5a.
5b.
Maeye: Hey guys. I'm in position.
Arayanna: I'm almost there. Another 10 minutes.
Maeye: Yes! I see you.
Charlotte: Charlie, here. I've got eyes on you both.
6a.
Arayanna: Alright. I'm in position.
Arayanna: Other me and Dunverys should be arriving in 30 minutes.
Arayanna: Everyone sit tight.
6b.
Maeye: Aray.
Arayanna: Yes, Maeye.
Maeye: You look pretty fucking sexy in that suit.
Arayanna: Focus, Maeye.
Maeye: I am focused. Focused on your sweet ass.
Arayanna: HA!
7a.
Maeye: Aray.
Arayanna: Yes, Maeye.
Maeye: I love you.
Arayanna: I love you, too.
7b.
Charlotte: I hate to break this up, you two, but we've got action.
Maeye: Got it.
8a.
Maeye: Ok. Here you guys come.
Maeye: Fighting has commenced.
Maeye: You guys are kicking ass.
Maeye: Riggorrot has opened the portal...
Maeye: And other Aray is gone.
Maeye: Holy shit there's a lot of bad guys down there.
Arayanna: OK. 3...2...1...
8b.
Arayanna: GO!
Glad to see Aray’s education of Maeye included a thorough grounding in Bowie.
Indeed…
I think one of the main reasons I did this whole thread (besides the obvious “rescue my sister” which probably could have been resolved with simply saying to The Merchant, “please rescue my sister”) was so that Maeye would have a thorough background in Earth pop-culture so she could throw out little quips from time to time.
Did Peaches just leave Maeye with… female version of blue-balls? or infect her with something to make her even more horny than normal?
Blue bits? Blue lips? Blue bean?
Blue bean sounds about right (one of the terms is ‘flicking the bean’ when masturbating)
Blue box.
Clam Jammed…aka ‘cock blocked ‘
She wasn’t ‘cock-blocked’, she was left ‘unreleased’ (Peaches brought her to the edge of climax and then left her wanting)
Also, leaving the bike up there where it is visible is… not a good idea
She should have left it at the base of the rock and walked up
Or at least laid it down so it isn’t skylined and stowed that orange bag somewhere…she picked the obvious spot for a sniper nest too, it’s probably presited by artillery/mortars.
Will give her the leeway of being new to firearms at all
Not her brightest move, for sure. Hopefully it does lead to a problem…….
Wait, was that a typo (“does lead to a problem”) or do you want there to be a problem?
It’ll be a lot shorter story if it doesn’t lead to a problem 😉
I’m with Maeye on this one: Aray’s armor looks awesome!
😀
You guys missed a typo! 😀
Which one?
And are you sure it was only one?
In the first frame, ‘uneventfulish’ needs to be ‘uneventfully’. In the 16th frame ‘you too’ needs to be ‘you two’.
I disagree re “uneventfulish.” It sounds like something Maeye would say, and your version doesn’t fit the context.
Same: noticed it straight away and figured Maeye was saying “Uneventful-ish”, as in, not quite uneventful, but close enough to not mention
You are right on the second one. Uneventfulish was intentional. “You too” was stupidness. 🙂
uneventful-ish…
Seems like a bad report. I think Maeye is now in posession of some incredibly valuable intel about the enemy here. However embarassing it may be and however baffling it may be, she should share it.
Part of the big problem here is understanding the motivations and command structure/sociology/organization of the enemy. The encounter with Peaches is a different kind of input to that understanding than anybody has got previously.
And if things go as planned, they’re going to be out of there – and the information then lost to the people who most need to understand it – in a matter of hours.
… What?
The only thing Maeye learnt was that Peaches has a very dexterous tongue
And blame Aray for not paying enough attention and missing that part of the report
Peaches responded to healing with something like gratitude, letting Maeye go (with a thump on the butt) instead of allowing other demons to find her. So they’re free-willed and have something like an emotional response that involves protecting people who’ve done something to help them.
And those are things nobody knew about the demonic invaders before right now.
Oh, right
Excellent insight! 😀
Phew! We’re back! Sorry about that – minor credit card issue. Next page is coming along. Updates soon!
Thought it was a minor issue, still got a little panicked though 🙂
Phew. Glad you made it back.
Any plan for the next update?
I’ve been experimenting a good bit with trying to change page/panel sizes and see if I can get things out a bit more quickly. I got this idea in my head that I should try to make my pages equal to standard comic book page size. But that means lots of changes. Most comic book panels are portrait or square sized. Almost all of my stuff is landscape sized. This turned out to be a bigger problem than I had imaged. It requires me to change how I see the image and I am just not quite there yet.
So, I’ve got a plan. I am going to try pages that are half the size of what I have been doing. This means 6-10 panels per page in my current format. New page coming very soon. Hope you guys like it.
I don’t remember why you stopped, but for a while you were putting out a piece of a page with the rest blacked out, then putting in more of the page, so you could do a page in several pieces. Maybe revisit that? That also lets you do the right amount to fit into your life at any particular time :J
You’ve got us on tenter hooks.