Bk1: Ch2: Pg15
Maeye: So were you going to tell me about your little naked friend here?
Fiet: Oh, this rain feels delicious.
Arayanna: I am sorry, Maeye. It is not something I normally talk about.
1b.
Fiet: Do not feel bad, Maeye. She does not tell anyone about me. I think she is embarrassed.
Arayanna: And when exactly was I supposed to bring this up? Hi, nice to meet you, thanks for waking me from my enchanted sleep, watch out for the giant wolves, and oh by the way, I have a 700 year old sprite trapped in my belly button piercing!?!
Fiet: Haha! Maeye, I think you are a good influence on my dear stolid Arayanna. She is always so serious. Forever the perfect pri...
Arayanna: Fiet!
Arayanna Please... time is of the essence.
2a.
Fiet: Of course my dear. I have served your family faithfully for 626 years. I will not fail you now. How may I be of assistance.
Arayanna: Maeye's cousins have been captured by Minox. We are in no condition to track them. I need you to find them for us.
Fiet: I thought I smelled cattle. How much of a head start do they have?
Arayanna: At least a day.
Fiet: That should not be a problem.
2b.
Maeye: When you find them, can you rescue them?
Fiet: No my dear. My powers are limited in this regard.
Maeye: But what if those things are... are... hurting them?
Fiet: I do not think you need to worry too much about that, dear. Minox are good for two things. destroying and fetching. It appears they have finished with their destroying, and now they are fetching.
Arayanna: As you said, Maeye. Whoever wanted them wants them alive. We will find them in time. I promise.
3a.
Fiet: Arayanna, I will need power.
Arayanna: Of course. You can take whatever you need.
Fiet: From you or form her?
Arayanna: I think it would be best if you took it from me.
Arayanna: Just give me e moment more, please.
Fiet: As you wish.
3b.
Arayanna: I know you are worried about your cousins, but please trust me, Maeye. This is the best way.
Maeye: OK. I trust you. Aray.
Arayanna: Good.
Arayanna: Now is there a town nearby, somewhere that we can find provisions and arms?
Maeye: No. The nearest town os at least two days walk from here.
Maeye: Wait! There is a tavern just a few miles to the east! They might be able to help us.
Arayanna: That will have to do.
4a.
Arayanna: OK, Fiet. I am ready.
5a.
Maeye: Well that's not something you see every day.
6a.
Fiet: Maeye, you are going to want to hold on to her.
Arayanna: I think you enjoy this a bit too much.
7a.
Maeye: Hey!! What the hell did you do to her, bird lady?
Arayanna: Maeye, it is OK. I just need some rest.
Fiet: She will need rest and she will need food.
7b.
Fiet: Get her to that inn. I will take care of your family. I am trusting you to do the same for mine.
Maeye: I will. I promise.
This is the largest page I have produced so far. I actually wanted to throw in one more panel, but I had to stop myself. There probably would have been another panel after that, and another after that…..
Anyway, hope you enjoy! I know I had fun making it. 🙂
Ah such cruel fantasy world where are heroes for 2 hot barely clothed women.Our girls needed to find money. Such a nice touch on realism.
Huh? They are the heroes, they don’t need some muscle-brained beefcake hitting on them all the time
Of course they are going to money, the inn probably won’t let them shelter or recuperate for free
The next section of the story takes place in an inn. My rough draft included a long convesation between Maeye and the inn-keep where Maeye convinces him to let them stay for free and she would pay him back later. It was long and tedious and would have taken up most of a page and I didn’t really like it. Then I thought, just have her pull some money off the carraige. Duh. 🙂
Not to mention: doing it the first way implies she would be paying ‘in kind’, and that would just be squicky (unless the inn-keep was a woman, and then that would just be cheating on Aray)
Now that looks like a fun way to exchange energy, even if it leaves the giver woozy for awhile afterwards 😀
Soooo, Aray is a Princess huh? Interestink developments (also loving how the tips of Fiet’s nips sparkle during the kiss-ference ;P)
Which is Fiet’s natural form? The girl or the raven? Her sprite-wings should be the same colour as her raven-wings personally
We’ll just have to see about Arayanna’s social rank later on. Fiet could have been about to say that Arayanna was a perfect little priss. 😀
Glad you enjoyed the sparkes. That’s not the only part of her that’s glowing.
Fiet is naturally as comfortable in all of her forms, but I think her winged sprite form is probably the one she would take most often.
Didn’t notice the southern sparkle until now 🙁
Hey, Nips weren’t the only things sparking and it appeared as if there was a direct power draw between the crotch areas. Those three should have some interesting threesomes down the road, with the power draw and the healing spark, as the get tired they get refilled.
Ha! I never thought of that. They could getting going forever. Somebody would prolly have to stop and make some sandwiches every once in a while. 🙂
I gots plenty of sandwich fixins energy drinks and I’ll stock up on vitamin E, send em over I’ll stock up on blank DVD’s copy my photo card to DVD and keep going.
My favorite panel on this page has got to be number 9. The mischevious look on Fiet’s face came out just the way i wanted it to. And Aray is verbally protesting, but pulling Fiet to her at the same time. Happy happy happy with this one.
Yes, that does look a delightful look on her face 😀
And yeah, methinks the Lady doth protest a little too much 😛
i am so loving this comic so far xD and yea, Fiet will surely be a favorite of mine.
I am glad you are enjoying our comic. There will be plenty more of Fiet to come.
We haven’t seen anyone cum yet 😛
Operative word there being “yet”. 🙂
Of course 😀
bring it on! cx
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and all of that with without update for 11 days now.Not that I pressure or something.
How do you all feel about the use of onamonapia in comics? I noticed that I have unconsciously and unintentionally slid away from using onamonapia, and I was wondering what you all thought.
Umm, that is words that describe the sound, isn’t it? Like ‘splortch’?
Yes. Exactly.
As long as you don’t get “Batman and Robin” about it don’t want to see, “Sock,Zip,Biff,Bam” to describe a fight.
You mean the Movie with the rubber nipples? Or the Adam West TV series?
“…more useless than nipples on breastplate.” – George R. R. Martin