“Anything your heart desires.” (shiver up my spine) Offers like that seldom end well for the receiving party. I don’t think I’d accept it, without having the chance to examine the full consequences of whatever I asked for in the first place.
Beautifully drawn and great storyline. I don’t know why but this feels like a sidestory. Nothing bad but still a strange feeling.
Note:
“…teh device…” should be “…the device…” and “…abilitiy…” be “…ability…”.
I knew there would be typos in this one! I was finishing in a rush before I had to run out the door. One of these days, I hope to publish this in a book format. I shudder to think of all of the typos I will have to go back and fix! 😀
Why not just fix the typos right away, when you find out about them? Fixing a couple of typos a week would take a lot less time than fixing several years’ worth of typos all at once, wouldn’t it?
I notice that everything you have published so far is part of Book 1. This implies at least one more. How many books do you have planned, and how long to the end of this one?
Just wondering.
Originally, I had a series of books in mind, all surrounding Arayanna The Undying and her adventures through time and space. Each chunk of the story would be a trilogy, this first trilogy being the story of where Arayanna meets Maeye, then the back story of Arayanna’s arrival in Prentil and her friendship to Heimere, and then the final story is primarily around their interaction with The Merchant. The second trilogy and third trilogies take place on different worlds – I don’t want to give away too much there.
Each book should be about 20 chapters, each chapter about 22 pages. But, when I look at the pace we are moving – 7 chapters in 5 years – I think I have change the pace of the books and the storylines a bit. I think this book will end up with about 10 chapters, so we are coming to the end pretty soon!
“Anything your heart desires.” (shiver up my spine) Offers like that seldom end well for the receiving party. I don’t think I’d accept it, without having the chance to examine the full consequences of whatever I asked for in the first place.
It definitely has the trixster demon feel, that is for sure!
Beautifully drawn and great storyline. I don’t know why but this feels like a sidestory. Nothing bad but still a strange feeling.
Note:
“…teh device…” should be “…the device…” and “…abilitiy…” be “…ability…”.
I knew there would be typos in this one! I was finishing in a rush before I had to run out the door. One of these days, I hope to publish this in a book format. I shudder to think of all of the typos I will have to go back and fix! 😀
Why not just fix the typos right away, when you find out about them? Fixing a couple of typos a week would take a lot less time than fixing several years’ worth of typos all at once, wouldn’t it?
Ooo, the one thing their heart desires, is a family: is he going to be the Daddy?
That is creepy. 😀
And it looks like Maeye just made a friend 😀
She does that wherever she goes. It’s part of what makes her wonderful and unique.
I notice that everything you have published so far is part of Book 1. This implies at least one more. How many books do you have planned, and how long to the end of this one?
Just wondering.
Originally, I had a series of books in mind, all surrounding Arayanna The Undying and her adventures through time and space. Each chunk of the story would be a trilogy, this first trilogy being the story of where Arayanna meets Maeye, then the back story of Arayanna’s arrival in Prentil and her friendship to Heimere, and then the final story is primarily around their interaction with The Merchant. The second trilogy and third trilogies take place on different worlds – I don’t want to give away too much there.
Each book should be about 20 chapters, each chapter about 22 pages. But, when I look at the pace we are moving – 7 chapters in 5 years – I think I have change the pace of the books and the storylines a bit. I think this book will end up with about 10 chapters, so we are coming to the end pretty soon!
Don’t feel you have to sacrifice the story for want of space or time
Not really thinking it as sacrifice as much as I would like to get a good bit of this story told before I am dead. 😀
That’s what kids are for 😛
It’s how the “Dune” series continued 😀
Loving the 5th Element reference, she does sort of remind of Leeloo
Glad you caught that! There is definitely some of Leeloo’s playful innocence back with awesome power in Maeye. 🙂
Happt Thanksgiving.!
speaking of typos,, Happy Thanksgiving..