Bk1: Ch2: Pg23
Ryder: So, two monks and a donkey walk into an inn.
1a: Are you doing well?
Maeye: Sure. Why?
Arayanna: You do not seem to be reacting the way I expected. Are you not worried about your cousins?
Maeye: Oh, I am plenty worried, but I guess worry cannot easily overcome a lifetime of training.
Arayanna: I do not think I understand.
Maeye: I am a Festiv, and this is what Festivs do... We make people feel better when they are worried or sad. We dance and sing and lift the spirits of all those around us. I guess I am just making myself feel better.
Arayanna: Maeye, you are an amazing woman.
2a.
Maeye: How are you feeling? Any memories returning?
Arayanna: Nothing from whatever events occurred to me to put me in the state that you found me, but everything else is clear.
Maeye: Can I ask you something?
Arayanna: Yes, of course.
Maeye: You are not from here, are you? I mean... you are not from Prentil?
Arayanna: No, Maeye, I am not from your world.
Maeye: So where are you from? How did you get here?
2b.
Arayanna: That is a very long story...
Maeye: We seem to have plenty of time.
Arayanna: We were at war.
3.
Arayanna: My home is called Elvia, on the planet, Tholla. Elvia was a beautiful land, and we were primarily a peaceful people until the invaders came. We did not know where they came from or how they chose our world, but they came and they came and they came. An endless wave of monstrous creatures intent on destroying and enslaving...
Arayanna: ... and worse.
4a.
Arayanna: Finally, after years of battle, great warriors like my sister, Dunverys, were leading us to victory. The beasts were being pushed back, our ravaged lands delivered, and it was then that we finally discovered from whence the creatures had come.
4b.
Arayanna: They traveled through magical portals created by hideous creatures called Rigorrots. Dunverys led us to one of these portals where we captured the Rigorrot before it could escape and learned their secrets.
4c.
Arayanna: And standing before the portal, we could see through it to the world where the demons had fled. It was not their home that they had retreated to, but another world like ours full of unsuspecting, unprepared people. Dunverys wanted us to pursue. I was terrified, but Dunverys was always so strong, so fierce. She knew our world, our Tholla, our Elvia would never be safe until these creatures were stopped once nad for all. So... we went through the portal.
5.
Arayanna: And that is how my sister and I found ourselves fighting alongside humans on a planet called Earth.
Adding to existing page. That s rare. This struggle sure looks hopeless.
Heya folks! Finally finally finally finished this page. I thought my PC died for good yesterday, but I brought her back from the dead, so we are still in business. I kinda screwed up when I re-upped this page and we lost all of our previous comments. Here’s a quick summary of what I remember:
Guesticus: Ew!
Keena: Silly joke.
Aray: 200,000! You are awesome.
Feori: Various thanks and well wishes mixed with some lame excuses and apologies.
Oh yea! Keena won the stupid donkey joke contest, so let us know what you want to see, girl.
My silly joke won?!?!? I will let you all know what I want to see. It will definately involve Aray and Maeye, I just need to decide on a setting.
Ok. 🙂
I would like to see a four seasons of Aray and Maeye themed render. You already have Winter, Spring and Summer done (Snowball fight, Fishing and Swim) add a fall one and put them all together and I think that would be uber cool! Prehaps the girls playing in a pile of leaves or walking in an autumnal forest setting.
Now that is a cool idea. It’s gonna take me a little time, but I promise I am on it.
check this out, it goes along with my silly joke very well. 😀
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SDeQT9zCvi4
Lanky, honkey-tonkey, winky, wonky donkey!!
LOL!
Trust a kiwi to come up with something like that 😛 (go Kiwis!)
How many people have attempted to say the second last verse without passing out, but failed?
😀
I love the lightning on the old panel, it reminds me of star wars the old republic :3
Now that was a fun game!
One of my favorites 😉
Oha, self censorship now?
Are you referring to the obscurement of the rape scene? Yea. Just wanted to bring things down from Rated X to a nice comfortable Rated NC17. Plus, it was getting me excluded from a number of sites where I normally post my work. I think it is still obvious what is going on. You can still tell that the demon is raping a dead or very close to dead woman, and it still conveys the whole “wrongness” of these beasties, just does it without shoving a big bloody demon cock in your face. 😀
Did Verys interupt a Succubus orgy? The way their legs are intwined, it sure looks like it
That was from a very cool set of free poses I found – lots of dead people or something like that. I love free poses!!
Awww! The elf general got eated 🙁
LOL! Yea she did. 😀 Not sure why, but that made me laugh alot.
Meanie 😛
Keena!!! Thank you so much for the donation!! You get a personalized thank you render. Who would you like to give you thanks?
Maeye, please. She is a redhead like me. 🙂
🙂 Ok. Any special requests?
Maeye in some gothic attire would be awesome!
Oooo. You’re a goth girl?
Indeed I am.
I really do need to get working on that render of you. 😀
You thank you post is up!! I truly hope you like it.
That invotive for Verys has me wondering what she would look like wet 😉
Very well done (but still like her sister more :D)
Thank you! Glad you like her. A wet Dunverys sounds like a very interesting idea. 😀
Not like that outfit is concealing much as it is 😛
Good point. 😀
Are we allowed to speculate on what is on the next page?
If so, guessing that Fiet returns a little weather-battered, either that or it’s Verys
You are always welcome to speculate. 🙂 Those are both excellent guesses.
What it turned out to be is much better (or at least hints at better, until Gus and/or Ryder interupt :P)
Terrible color contrast with the red letters.
lolwut wasnt expecting earth to appear
I have to agree. I wasn’t able to read the text at all once it got to the darker backgrounds. And yes, this is a late comment, because I’m binging from the start, having only just found this comic.
Deep red letters on sky blue BG or deep blue letters on yellow BG would maximize readability; if the red letters and yellow BG are both needed, then maybe a sky blue glow around the letters?