Yeah Sha’ag – get your hands of her!!! Aray’s eyes look so beautiful and stormy. Excellent details on this page. The water droplets on Aray’s face, the section of how she took each bad guy out (I really like how you placed the overlap with her taking out the big bald guy) and the action of her twisting around to throw her knife. Thanks for getting Aray there before umm, well you know…
Didn’t think it was an error, just that hadn’t noticed until just then
Was just thinking of something else, not sure if it is possible, but the last panel could have been, possibly maybe, improved by having the edges going dark? As though we are seeing it from Aray’s pov just as she is passing out
Love this comic, the story is building up very nicely. The artwork and attention to detail is absolutely stunning as well! Looking forward to checking in on your pages regularly 🙂
If that’s not a statement of eternal love, I don’t know what is. Half dead from taking on and killing 4 bully boys with an arrow through the gut she shows up and snarls at the sex imp, Get your hands off MY girl before collapsing.
Yeah Sha’ag – get your hands of her!!! Aray’s eyes look so beautiful and stormy. Excellent details on this page. The water droplets on Aray’s face, the section of how she took each bad guy out (I really like how you placed the overlap with her taking out the big bald guy) and the action of her twisting around to throw her knife. Thanks for getting Aray there before umm, well you know…
Thank you for noticing all the details. I very much appreciate the time you take to look at the pages and to comment on them. 😀
I especially like Aray’s expression in panel 2.
That is one serious “you picked the wrong person to f*ck with” face in that panel!
LOL! Exactly!!
Complete with the ‘we have done talking, business time’ break to the sentence 😀
Did Aray or Fiet pull out the arrow? That looks like a serious-damage arrow head 🙁
Aray and Fiet got the arrow out, but yea…it did some significant damage.
Fixed the navigation problems! So now if you click in First, it goes to the very first page of the comic, not just the first page of the chapter. 🙂
I also updated the Holidays and Incentives galleries. And I took down the Cast page – I’ll get back to that one soon.
I am really late on this month’s incentive. It is cooking now – I’ll have it up tomorrow.
I don’t remember if I have commented before, but I have been following along quietly for a long time now.
I thought I would break my silence to say that this is one of the best pages yet. Every part of it is very well done.
Thank you for breaking your silence and thank you for your very kind words! 😀
Just noticed that Aray’s left sleeve is missing in panels 14 and 15
Yea – she took that off to deal with the wound. That scene will be in the director’s cut. LOL.
Didn’t think it was an error, just that hadn’t noticed until just then
Was just thinking of something else, not sure if it is possible, but the last panel could have been, possibly maybe, improved by having the edges going dark? As though we are seeing it from Aray’s pov just as she is passing out
That’s actually a really cool idea. Wish I had thought of it!
Love this comic, the story is building up very nicely. The artwork and attention to detail is absolutely stunning as well! Looking forward to checking in on your pages regularly 🙂
Thank you very much. And welcome to the family!
Hoping that Sha’ is mindful of her teeth, or Maeye will be ready for a new piercing 😛
LOL!!
Don’t let Aray see that incentive!!! 😛
Hehe. Seriously.
If that’s not a statement of eternal love, I don’t know what is. Half dead from taking on and killing 4 bully boys with an arrow through the gut she shows up and snarls at the sex imp, Get your hands off MY girl before collapsing.
😀