Bk1: Ch8: Pg5
Maeye: It's not working.
1b.
Maeye: I cannot feel the injury to repair it.
Maeye: I am sorry.
Korrinisa: It is alright, friend Maeye. I thank you for trying. Truly.
2a.
Maeye: I really am sorry. We can keep trying if you want, but I don't think this is going to work.
Maeye: It's beyond my power.
2b.
Seraphi: Are you alright?
Korrinisa: Yes, friend Seraphi. I am no better or worse than I was a few moments ago.
3a.
Seraphi: You are not disappointed?
Korrinisa: Maybe a small amount, yes. But I did not have great hope that this would work.
3b.
Korrinisa: I remember seeing when I was a child. I keep close hold of those memories.
Korrinisa: But there are so many new things I have learned about since I came to live with you.
4a.
Korrinisa: I wish I could see these things.
Korrinisa: The sun.
Korrinisa: Trees.
Korrinisa: Horses.
4b.
Maeye: Got it.
Korrinisa: You.
Trascript: One month ago...
5a.
Maeye: Hey big guy.
The Merchant: Big Guy? Hmm. I suppose that works.
The Merchant: How may I help you, child. Do you need another massage?
5b.
Maeye: No...well maybe later.
Maeye: Anyway, this "whatever your heart desires" deal. Is that like one wish per person?
The Merchant: Provided they are within reason, I do not see why I cannot reward you both.
The Merchant: What is it that your heart desires?
6a.
Maeye: I want to live forever.
Maeye: Well, to be more exact, I want to live as long as Arayanna does.
6b.
The Merchant: Silly child. Do not ask for that which you already have.
6c.
Maeye: Not helpful!
Maeye: Seriously! Riddles are not helpful!
Maeye: Do I still get a wish?
Transcript: Present day...
7a.
Maeye: Where did you hide that thing, Aray?
7b.
Maeye: "Do not ask for that which you already have...""
7c.
Maeye: Ok, Mister Riddles.
7d.
Maeye: Here goes nuthin.
8a.
The Merchant: Well, that was quicker than I had anticipated. Where is the...
The Merchant: I do not see the pillar.
Maeye: Yea, that's not why I brought you here.
8b.
Maeye: I know what I want for my wish.
Please let it be for Korin to have her sight restored, no strings (or anything else sneaky) attached
Maeye is using her wish to help another, so Mr The Merchant had better not dick her around!
Wait wait wait, is Mr The Merchant implying that Aray isn’t going to live long? o_O
No, I think he’s hinting that her magic will keep Maeye alive as long as she wants to be, she just doesn’t know it yet.
Yeah, was just looking at it from the silly angle 😛
That sounds like a good asumption. 😀
Slight typo in the webic (not the transcript), Korin’s last line in panel four: “momentsa go”
As for the transcript: you have Maeye’s and Korin’s comments out of order in 4b, Korin speaks first
For the love of monkeys. Will I ever get a page typo free? I think at this point it will be easier for me to just declare my own language where I never spell anything wrong.
You will still misspell half of them 😀
Like said some long time ago: a few typos don’t spoil the story 😀
😀
Not that I’m complaining, but is it me, or are Maeye’s outfits are increasingly raunchy? <.<
Please ignore either of the extra are’s.
I will admit that the outfit in this page is not something that anyone would normally walk around in, but hey…might as while have something nice to look at while we are doing character development, right? 😀 😀
Plus, keep in mind that Maeye is warm all the time now with the energy she has coursing through her, and she needs to keep her skin exposed to the air so she can more easily absorb mana from the air. And yes, both are plot devices convienently developed so that I can put her in skimpy outfits. 😀
Haha, like I said, I’m not complaining 😛 Just something I noticed of late.
I did forget about her being warm all the time, though. That is a good reason for dressing lightly 🙂
It’s just you. 😉 Maeye’s outfits are revealing, yes. Sexy, yes again. Raunchy? Not even a little bit. 😛
Agreed! 😀
As long as Maeye is comfortable, and that she is picking out her wardrobe, let her be